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i could circle
your shine by morning, become the yellow sky
dying to disappoint you,

tying none of it together even though it’s right there.

pushed like being down is a compliment,
i am partial to whitman and vinegar.  i could carry
children like carousels,
consume them like caramels, chew them with my mouth open.

i could cycle
from weak to weaker, talk water into crevices
until everything rots,

not mind that black and white forgives a lot.

pushed like being down is a retreat,
i am partial to this particular trick of the heat.
:icontigereverskin:

Author's Comments

there’s the rub. written march 25, 2009.

submitting this now so i’ll stop tinkering with it...

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:iconyouinventedme:
this rub is more like a happy ending

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one half of ~ZombiesAteUs
:icontigereverskin:
ha! :D

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“why do writers write? because it isn't there.”
—thomas berger

“no honest poet can ever feel quite sure of the permanent value of what he has written: he may have wasted his time and messed up his life for nothing.”
—ts eliot
:iconcharrlie:
I don't think I get it, but I like it

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I am creating my own style of stupidity. You are welcome to emulate it.
:icontigereverskin:
that's good enough for me :)

--
“why do writers write? because it isn't there.”
—thomas berger

“no honest poet can ever feel quite sure of the permanent value of what he has written: he may have wasted his time and messed up his life for nothing.”
—ts eliot

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